ume my age based on my writing skills? Don't just say 'you're a teen, you asked this'.No it's not like that?

You need more clarity - you need to use proper grammar and punctuation. You've used the wrong words in places, eg, sound is not "disheveled." I'm not sure there's such a things as "shocked perspiration," and "confirming swish of my head" seems odd. keep working on it.